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  <subtitle>Much ado about the usual nothing.</subtitle>
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    <title>Aphelion</title>
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    <published>2001-05-09T18:00:13+00:00</published>
    <updated>2007-07-15T18:23:57+00:00</updated>
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      <name>domesticat</name>
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    <summary type="html"><![CDATA[<p><strong>I. Perigee</strong></p>
<p>Our ends of the world diverge on Sundays,<br />
whose mornings I spend in blissful sleep<br />
while you, dutiful, arrow-straight, make haste<br />
to wash and clothe and drive.  All to keep</p>
<p>the Sabbath.  In the winding arch and curve<br />
of your days, this one claims itself parahelion:<br />
the closest to origins; the day to observe,<br />
revere, reflect; resolution.<strong>II.  Parabola</strong></p>
<p>Two lines, if not drawn in perfect parallel,<br />
deal with the pains of intersection at some point.<br />
They meet, then disengage, and tell</p>
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    <content type="html"><![CDATA[<p><strong>I. Perigee</strong></p>
<p>Our ends of the world diverge on Sundays,<br />
whose mornings I spend in blissful sleep<br />
while you, dutiful, arrow-straight, make haste<br />
to wash and clothe and drive.  All to keep</p>
<p>the Sabbath.  In the winding arch and curve<br />
of your days, this one claims itself parahelion:<br />
the closest to origins; the day to observe,<br />
revere, reflect; resolution.<strong>II.  Parabola</strong></p>
<p>Two lines, if not drawn in perfect parallel,<br />
deal with the pains of intersection at some point.<br />
They meet, then disengage, and tell<br />
their congruence through changes made past their joint.</p>
<p>At aphelion, vertical velocity equals nil,<br />
the sum force of our opposing lines:<br />
my searching, your force of will,<br />
a stalemate meeting of steadfast minds.</p>
<p><strong>III.  Apogee</strong></p>
<p>My ever-changing search will lead me high<br />
and low without regularity or conclusion,<br />
especially on Sunday mornings when&mdash;alone&mdash;I try<br />
to find my own linear resolution.</p>
<p>We course on different paths, whose depths<br />
and heights match most days&mdash;save one<br />
in which we both attempt to accept<br />
the existence of other parabolas besides our own.</p>
<p> ***</p>
<p>A first draft.  Not really special, and not really any good, but I thought I'd toss it up here anyhow.  (If I only posted what was good, domesticat would see perhaps ten posts a year.)  </p>
<p>Fourth stanza's good; I'll probably keep it.  Don't really know about the rest.  I like the concept of parabolas, despite the fact that I had to check wording with Heather to make sure I didn't say anything stupid the physicsgeeks could call me on, but I don't think I approached it correctly here in this draft.</p>
<p>Nevertheless, I'll leave this here as an example of words thrown together and as a snapshot of my mind from this morning.  Take it and go on with whatever you were doing.</p>
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